1 word - Fab.
Hey Anubha...An extension to your poem.. Cudnt help it. Jus wrote em..aft I read your lines. :)Not dreaming bout u..yet I cant help reminisce those memories of our past long gone,I think n' smile of the times for lone,I believe it was destiny at play,that made u go and me stay.I remember your words and I remember me being shy,though I don't clearly remember the real reason why,Was it the words that made me so?or jus' the fact that u were with me.. I do not know...You and I can never be,Yet for some reasonI look hopefully at Destiny..Will it make a U turn and bring you around...?Or do I keep pretending I'm happy wearing this heavy "It's over" crown?
Beautiful.... But I wish life were really that easy... I wish it was that easy to move on... Nice poem.. :)
Straight from the heart!Simply AWESOME! =)
At the risk of saying it, but it's true. This poem has made my day. *Applause* =)
nice poem.I hope the writer of the poem gets a nice way to repay the pain the subject caused. I had found a slightly crass one on some blog:I know there will come a day,when we're older.And we'll meet again,at a reunion,or a wedding.And you'll smile and say something nice,like "you look great",or "I heard about the baby".And I'll smile, and say something like,"I hope you burn in hell.Asshole"
well would just saysimple fabolous and awsome yarr..itz just good :)
superb, keep it up
Wow. Now that's a real poem!
B-e-a-Utiful !!Killer Verse -"I know that there's someone,who's made for me.And that you and I,can never be."
@prasad thanks :)@AnandOMG.. that was WOW!!Me is impressed!! :PI'm not really pretending to wear that crown though; I've really moved on. :)@Aptly SaidWelcome to my blog! :)Thanks; it is easy to move on once you decide to!@AditiThankoos :D@Adarsh MunjalWelcome to my blog! Glad I made your day! :) Thanks and keep visiting.@oscar:) :)@NissimLOL :D That was too good!!! Hahahaha@partywithnehaThanks! :)@RitzThanks a lot!@Winds of ChangeThank you!!@Jaspreet AidenWas expecting you to start another debate here too!! :D :D Thanks a lot! :P@alphabetworldThanks dear! Good to see you've started writing again! :) @JDT-h-a-n-k-y-o-u! :D
hi..that one mesmerised..probs the loveliest one in the recent past
lovely blog....आप बहुत अच्छा लिखती हैं मेरी कलम - मेरी अभिव्यक्ति
LOVELY poem....Showcases mixed feelings....those of 'good riddance', and mebbe even regret.Aint easy to forget ur first loveCheersCRDp.s- visiting ur blog after ages...do visit mine :)
wow! u r a poet too?
@AnilThanks and welcome to my blog! :)@अनिल कान्तThanks a lot and welcome here! Visited your blog, you write very well too. Haven't seen many good hindi blogs! :)@CRDSo true! :)@ReemaHehe.. just tried!! :D
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